Hi everyone,
I am doing my lesson plan this week. If any of you have the time to quickly look through it, I posted the draft of my lesson plan and the worksheet I created for the students below. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!
Lesson plan:
Tuesday, November 1, 2011
Lesson Plan: Reviewing grammar (verb tenses must be consistent) and peer editing the wiki.
Learning Targets: I can correct inappropriate shifts in verb tenses in my own writing.
Daily Objectives:
1. I can peer edit and correct errors in my classmate’s wiki projects.
2. I can correct errors in my own work based on peer feedback.
Set-Up: laptop, LCD projector, copies of grammar worksheet, printed copies of the wiki page
Do Now: (5 min.)
1. Take the handout.
2. Fill in the blank space with the rule.
Mini-Lesson: (15 min.)
1. Grammar review: “A few weeks ago, Ms. Shoaf gave you a hand out with four rules on it. Today, we’re going to focus on one of those specific rules because I noticed a lot of you are still having some trouble with it after reading all of your wiki pages.”
2. “Please look at the handout you took when you walked into the room. Read the sentence at the top and fill in the blank with the rule.”
3. Circulate for less than one minute and check to see that everyone is filling in the blank. Call on students for the answer “must be consistent”.
4. Review tenses for right examples:
Ask them:
- What is present tense?
- What is past tense?
- What is future tense?
5. Tell students to read the three right sentences and decide whether they are in the present, past, or future tense. Circle the tense in which you think the sentence is written. Circulate for a few minutes to check for their understanding and clear up any confusion. Once it seems that the students have answered (1 min.), move on.
6. Read the first sentence and then ask students, “Who can tell me whether the first sentence is in the present, past, or future tense?” or “Who can tell me what tense this sentence is in” Ask student “Why?”. Repeat for the second and third sentence.
7. Read the wrong sentence aloud to the students. Ask them, “What do you think is wrong with this sentence. Take a minute to read it to yourself and see if you can figure out what is wrong with it and how you can fix it.” Read the sentence to them again.
Possible correct answers:
a. I am walking to school today. I am going to call my sister before I get on the train (present).
b. I walked to school today. I called my sister before I got on the train (past).
c. I am going to walk to school today. I will call my sister before I will get on the train (future).
Explain that all of these sentences are correct because the verb tense in each is consistent.
8. “Now write your own sentence using only one of the tenses. It can be in present tense, past tense, or future tense. You only have to use one of the tenses.” Ask students to share their questions & then ask them “Why do you think I asked you to write sentences only using one tense?”
Answer: Because verb tenses must be consistent which means only using one at a time.
Group work: (15 min.)
1.Tell the students Ms. Shoaf has graded their wiki projects and that they all have the opportunity to revise their page. “Once you are done revising your page and would like Ms. Shoaf to grade it again, email her from your uasdc.com account.” Explain that they will now have class time to peer edit.
2. Before breaking the students into groups, tell them “You are each going to receive a classmate’s wiki page and it is your job to peer edit it. You are to work together within your groups to peer edit the wiki pages specifically for verb tense consistency. Although you will be working in groups, you are each responsible for one specific page. The page will have the line peer edited by your name. Remember, you can use your group for support. If you’re not sure about a sentence, ask your group mates if they can help you. You can write your corrections right on the paper.”
3. Break them into predetermined groups (wiki groups) and distribute wiki pages.
4. Periodically remind them of the rule “Verb tenses must be consistent”.
Partner work: (5 min.)
- Announce that each student is partners with the person whose wiki page they are currently correcting. Tell them to go to their partner now to discuss what you have edited (there may be a group of three).
- Explain to each other what mistakes you found in the work and how you think it can by fixed. If you disagree on a sentence, discuss amongst yourselves to see if the two (or three) of you can figure it out together.
Independent work/ Wrap up(5 min.)
1. Tell students to return to their assigned seats.
2. Work independently to correct your mistakes (if time allows).
- (This is number 3. I don't know why the blog will not let me change the numbers.)Remind students, “You can now edit your work, for this rule and for the other learning targets, on the wiki. You should keep this rule in mind as you finish writing your first draft of the C-PAS project which is due this Thursday.”
- (This is number4) Ask students, “Are any sentences that really confused you?” or “Are there sentences you think your partner marked as wrong, but you believe are correct?”.
5. Have students pass all their papers to the left and into the green box.
Worksheet:
Name: _________________________________________________________11/1/11
Verb Tense Review Sheet
Fill in the blank with the rule.
Verb tenses must _______________________________________________.
Below are sentences from the wiki. The first three follow this rule and the last one does not. After reading the sentences, decide which sentence is written in the present tense, the past tense, or the future tense. Circle the tense you think it right.
Right: Rafts were easy to make and they were very useful for trade. Logs were held by poles.
Present Past Future
Right: He will inform people about a problem.
Present Past Future
Right: It’s apparent that they are being mistreated and are under intense conditions.
Present Past Future
Wrong: I am walking to school today. I will call my sister before I got on the train.
Write your own sentence using present, past, or future tense: